Draft of Open Letter

In this blog post I will link my draft of the open letter. I will also write a short paragraph giving relevant details about my draft and what I'm looking for in terms of peer review.

Screenshot from my computer, 12/5/15

Draft of Open Letter

This draft is not much more than the content of the two previous blog posts. Nonetheless, I would still appreciate all feedback on what I do have. I think the weakest area in this draft is the lack of transitions from thought to thought. Any suggestions on how to resolve this issue or any other issue you find would be very much appreciated. Also, please point out any and all convention errors for this genre.