Screenshot from my computer, 9/12/2015 |
After viewing Evan's and Laurence's clusters, I learned that I should probably add more supporting details to my own cluster. Laurence's cluster was mostly topics, and I liked the way all the main ideas were laid out. Evan's cluster was a bit more detailed, and used colors and different branches to lay out his ideas in a neat manner. I plan to go back into my own cluster to hopefully reorganize some information and add details to my main topics.
I like how your cluster has a lot of information but it is still easy to follow. I also used Coggle and like the features because it is easy to use and it does a good job at organizing information. Your topic is really interesting and relates to mine in the sense that there are things being engineered with the purpose of improving lifestyles but it brings up questions.
ReplyDeleteI definitely chose to ramble a lot more withing my cluster map, but it interesting to see how a map with a lot less text is equally as effective. It is definitely a lot easier to follow from the audience perspective. I was a little selfish in structuring my own in order to figure out my own thoughts rather than explaining my plan to the audience.
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