Reflection on Project 3 Draft

In this blog post I will reflect on my own project 3 draft and the peer review process. I will also discuss the aspects of project 3 that I need to focus on moving forward.

Screenshot from my computer, 11/15/15

I reviewed Samantha's and Michael's drafts of project 3.

1. Mira and Samantha reviewed my Project 3 draft.

2. The feedback these two provided was very helpful. Specifically, the ideas Mira and Samantha had to do a better job of persuading my audience and sticking to my genre were very helpful. I will certainly take all of their ideas into account when working towards my final draft

3. For me, nearly all aspects of my Project 3 need work. The aspects that need it the most are genre, audience, and argumentation. For genre, I plan on adding an audio voiceover for all the slides in my PowToon. For audience, I plan on developing and revising my argument much more to make it as convincing as possible. For argumentation, I need to implement lots of logical and emotional appeals to create the best argument possible.

4. I'm feeling more confident about the overall direction of my project after the conference this week. Hearing what Sean had to say about the project helped me better understand what type of presentation he was looking for.